Friday 24 May 2019

captain cook


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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 May 2019 at 09:34

    (A suggestion) You did make it hard to understand and you spelt somethings wrong and at the end of paragraph 1 the last line it was hard to understand thanks

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  2. Anonymous13 November 2019 at 11:37

    hi troy my name is kade and in the first sintens the second to last row was supust to to be shot a maori so mabey try to fix it next time but a part from that it was grate

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  3. Anonymous19 November 2019 at 09:13

    I like all the research that you have did. Now I know more about captain cook . but could you add more info because there is not that much. keep it up, Arlo.

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